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Wednesday, 13 August 2014

My book reveiw


Auther Beverley Naidoo
As thier baby sister Dineo is very sick and needs their mum, Naledi and Tiro set off on foot for a long, hot, 3oo miles away jouney to Jo'burg  where their mother works as a maid and gets only little amount of money.
On the way the brother and sister get some help and also make good friends.
I like this book because it teaches you that no matter what culture you are we are all special and this teaches you to never give up.
The one thing I did not like about this story is how the white people treated the black people.
I would rate this book 9/10 because it makes you want to read more and its a true story.
I would recommend this book to ten year olds and up
Book reveiw written by Alyssa

Wednesday, 30 July 2014

A world with peace

Whats the point in war and fighting ?
Why cant we realise what we are doing ?
Why are we all created the same way but yet we fight ?

When you realise it some of these questions can be quite scary and they make you think how stupid we are all acting .
I think that we should all start to improve and stop what the whole world is doing and bring peace back to the world like it was at the very start .
We do not need to be afraid of one another so put down your weapons and give a smile .
We don't need to fight for land we can share and be the friends we were supposed to be .
We need to help one another and work together to put peace into the world and make it a better place .
When you realise it its actually really easy to make the world peaceful.


Tuesday, 24 June 2014

Guitar Research

My guitar research
The guitar is my favourite instrument and I bet you will like it after I read this.

Guitar History
Gaetano Vinaccia invented the first ever guitar and Gaetano family were also known for crafting mandolins but Gaetano wanted to try something new.  The first ever guitar was very small and it only had four strings just like a ukulele.  The guitar originated in Spain and became popular in the 16th and 17th centuries.  What really amazed me was that the guitar has been played for at least 3,000 years!  The oldest surviving guitar-like instrument was found in Ancient Egypt.

Back in the days rock bands and other bands used at least three or more guitars just for the different tune!

About the Guitar
The first thing you need to know before you go and play a guitar are the different parts:  The head also known as the head stock, the tuners, the nut, the neck, fret board, frets, body, the sound hole, the bridge and last but not least the strings the things that make the music all happen.

The tuning of the guitar
Why should we have to tune the guitar?  If you don’t tune the guitar the strings will get too lose and they will sound too deep or too high.  The strings will react to the temperature of a room. If you tuned the guitar in a warm room and went outside and it was cold the guitar would slightly untune so then you would have to tune again.

I hope you've enjoyed learning about the guitar - there's a lot more to it than strumming.

WWW. guitar history
wiki books


Wednesday, 11 June 2014

The Volcano

The volcano is fast asleep waiting for a time to destroy and explode.
The day had finally came after years and years of being asleep.
The volcano spits boiling hot rocks and blows violent smoke ,suddenly lakes of fire pour down the volcano destroying anything in its way.
After ages of damaging, the land was destroyed nothing was left but ashes.
Years later the land was rebuilt and there the volcano stays fast asleep waiting to destroy once again.


Monday, 9 June 2014


I look to find the remains of my home after the storm
But all that was left was the mud.
The mud sucks my feet in leaving dirty footprints deep down behind me.
I struggle to walk the mud gets deeper and deeper then.....
The thunder rolls.

By Alyssa