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Monday, 9 June 2014


I look to find the remains of my home after the storm
But all that was left was the mud.
The mud sucks my feet in leaving dirty footprints deep down behind me.
I struggle to walk the mud gets deeper and deeper then.....
The thunder rolls.

By Alyssa

1 comment:

  1. That's beautiful Alyssa. You've managed to give a really strong image in just a few words. Well done.